The torrent that lies within
Resilient to subside
Thrusting to unseen fronts
The soul surging to begin.
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True deceptions
Faltered perceptions
Farce, our guise
Life, less wise!
Overlooked, felonies
Of life, a blur
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Life is thus
Unscathable dreams
A never ending pursuit
Myriad expectations
None satisfied
Swelling ego
One that prides blatantly, shamelessly!
Monday, April 16, 2007
Random meanderings
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10 comments:
loved the last part...
superbly put...
nice haiku type writings.... :)
I liked the last bit esp!
I quite liked the way you began the poem--the first part--quite elegant and optimistic. However by the end of it it seems to me that your optimism has dwindled quite a bit
Thanks for all the feedback! :)
Prits & ruchi - I love th last part too!!
GPS - I looked into Haiku now!
@Shantanu - Yeah, its a collection of mixed feelings alright! Thanks for peeking in though!
i'm just trying to think what you must've been thinking while writing these lines..was it something precise?
Prolific!!! Abstract!! And the most apt title. Keep it roolin;)
@satyajit --- Nothing really particular.. like i said - random meanderings. Of course I wouldnt deny that it comes out of experience!
@Scribbler - Thanks!
No prob. Your thoughts on my new venture into poetry would be much appreciated :)
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